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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似,简历一般包括个人情况,教育背景,个人能力,目标职业等信息。在写简历时,一定要实事求是,不可夸大其词,要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外,还要注意简历的格式和语言,格式要整齐明了,语言要简洁有力。
作者词汇基础很好,也能较灵活使用高级词汇,望继续努力;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
With the development of society,more and more students are erolled by the universities and colleges year and year,and the number is still getting larger and larger.It is difficult for the graduates to find a suitable job.More and more students are failing to search for jobs.It is said that Chinese students lack working and real-life experience.The college life doesn't teach us how to work in the company.We don't have Hands-on background.That leads us to fail in the job search. So what can we do to change this situation? In my opinion,we should adjust the psychological gap.The life before we graduate is too comfortable.We should get out of the psychological comfort zone.Only when we realize we will face many difficulties can we make preparations.As the saying goes,"Failure is the mother of success."Experience is important.First off,get down to basics.The experts advise graduates to find a regular job as quickly as possible so that they can earn some money to support themselves ,and get much working experience, which will help to find a better career in the future.When you work at small company where you could have more responsibility, more excitement, closer relationships with your coworkers, and a greater sense of accomplishment than you could have at a big company. Even the smallest and the most ordinary job, such as cleaning the street is also the necessary part to keep the society going smoothly. Consequently, those who do those most insignificant jobs should get respected as much as those being engineers or doctors.So job is equal.The important is how to find a job rather than what kind of jobs to find.