注意:
1. 开头和结尾已为你写好(不记入总词数 ); 2. 词数100左右。
作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。
There are many traffic ways you can choose,such as plane,train.The airport have the NO.45bus,you can get out of the car at the end.I wiil go to the station to meet you if you arrive by train. And I have prepared many activities for you.We will go to the nearby island to playing,where are very beautiful!We can swim in a blue sea if you want,you can eat some fresh seafood that delicious!We have fresh air,and we can jogging, mountain climbing and so on. Local people have warm welcomes to you!