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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8984
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

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文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;作者词汇基础不错,不过文中存在个别拼写错误;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

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Inward quanties With time goes by,more and more people prefer to conclude a man from his appearance rather than judge them from their inward quanties.What it want to convery is that we need to change our views about appearance,for me,it's unwise judging a person by surface,instead learing hohw to know a man from every aspects. First and formost,this is very indespensable that as a well-behaved person to contribute our strength to country.Thus cultivating a good quanties is necessary.For another,if we judge a person just according with his appearance,maybe lead to a lot of mistakes some can avoid.For the last aspect,understanding a man ought to acquire informations coiver many fields,otherwise,we easy to make mistakes. From the above imagion,learning juage a man isn't appearance but inward.

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