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I have a best friend.Her English name is Kate.She is eleven years old.She is a student.She is in five grade one class. She has big eyes,a small mouth,a long black hair .She is tall and thin. She likes singing,dancing,reading book,piaying the piano,swimming and listening to music. She likes English class,music class,P.E. class math class and art class . She is my best friend!