请作者增加词汇丰富度;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
I have a good friend.her name is lily.She has a big eyes and black hair.she has small mouth and nose.she is vey nice.she help me very much.She is my best friend.I like her very much.When I sad,she comfort me and encourage me.I also do this.We are good friend.I hope our friendship never change.