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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5942
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分68.0分
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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文章词汇表达丰富,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。

用户练习作文:

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living in a city. I`m totally agree with this statement. First of all, the environment of countries is much better than of cities. The sky is mild blue and the air is so fresh. Generlly,you don`t have to worry about the quality of water here. You can always enjoy youself into the atmosphere which can`t hardly enjoy in cities. For the other hand, the fruit and vegetables in countries are often local grow, which mean that is more fresh and healthy. Meanwhile, the competition in villages is less fierce than in big cities. So you can live in a easier way and have less stress.

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