2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；文中从句数量不足；作者能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇，但拼写方面要再接再厉。

when you have seen somepoints you have decision on that or judge it directly? maybe it is not true for us ,and we was covered in a drum. so like this problem,whatever you have seen and listened ,you should think it again. once you have seen a point,but you did'nt understand it how you can judge it ,if so you final decision maybe wrong and effect yourslef and team , even effect team efficiency and quality. only after listened from others ,we can't decided it ,because some person transit it one by one ,this point have change over and lost itself truth, some time some one will talk big if we use theirs oppions to do our works ,oberviously we have made a mistake for ourself and our company. so whatever you have seen somepoints we can't judge it directly should be supported by evidence.