文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;文中从句数量不足;作者词汇基础不错,注意极个别的拼写错误。
When you have seen some points you have decision on that or judge it directly? Maybe it is not true for us, and we were covered in drums. So like this problem,whatever you have seen and listened ,we should think it again. Once you have seen a point,but you didn't understand it how you can judge it ,if so you final decision maybe wrong and effect yourself and team , even effect team efficiency and quality. Only after listened from others ,we can't decided it ,because some person transit it one by one ,this point have changed over and lost itself truth, some time somone will talk big if we use theirs oppions to do our works ,oberviously we have made a mistake for ourself and our company. So whatever you have seen somepoints we can't judge it directly should be supported by evidence.
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