2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；作者词汇量积累不错，一些高级词汇的使用比较灵活，有个别拼写错误。

The comic shows a picture of people who focus on the cell phone but the road when crossing the street, and they use walking sticks to avoid barrier so that they can keep staring the screens. Obviously, this comic is discriding the phenomen that people nowadays are pay to much attention on theirs phone. I agree the point that the people are overusing the smart phone. Because, first, it will make you weak and waste your time and youth. I have seem so many my friends and classmates spend most of theirs time on it but study or sport or something acturlly, refreshed theirs social apps and games meaninglessly, dure to they lack of sport and think, they become weak phycisically and interllgentcally. They are not looks like a young but a elder when compair with those people who haven't induge in smart phone. Smart phones are somewhat like the snake on Eden's apple tree, it was desige for attract people like drug, altrough it is not. It is true that smart phone is convincing our life. However, it is true that it has its negative. We must tride it reasonly.