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Arrangement for the tour Nowadays , my friend Daniel , the manager of a travel agency , invites me to make an arrangement about a tour to Shanghai for the customers of primary school students . Now , let me tell you this plan in detail . For one thing , there are , from August the 10th to August the 15th , totally 5 days during our tour , including the back-and-forth time . Besides , we will go to Shanghai from Kunming by train and take sightseeing buses to the following series of scenic spots . During the tour , we will have comfortable rests in the home of tourists . Shanghai , of all the tourist places that have existed in china among numerous spots of sightseeing , may be the increasingly popular one . A sizable percentage of the places of historic interest , well-known to the whole world , sit in Shanghai . Among those , in my rational perception , some classic spots are extremely worthwhile to go , such as Orientak Pearl TV tower , Disney Land , Huangpu river . Next , let we come to the relevant itinerary , on the first day , we need spend a whole day on the way and the hotel , setting ourselves well in Shanghai . One the second day , 0riental Pearl Tower , as one of the representative of culture of Shanghai , should be the first station to go . It is a mixed-use tower with telecommunnications transmitters broadcasting over 80 miles , a restaurant , a hotel and several observation desks . when seeing it from afar , it appears as though pearls are dropping from the sky onto a lush green plate that symbolizes jade . Thus , the two exceedingly valuable Chinese gemstones are represented in its structure . On the third day , we will have fun in Disney Land . Disney Land , as one of the most spectacular and innovative Disney theme parks in history ; is waiting for us to discover a never-before-seen world of wonder where people can ignite the magical dream within their hearts . On the forth day , we are going to enjoying the beauty along Huangpu River , relaxing bodies and hearts . The last day , it is time to leave . Finally , the cost of entrance tickets accounts to 500 yuan , the cost of transportation and accommodation accounts to 600 yuan , so what you should pay just costs no more than 1100 yuan . It is a truth universally acknowledeged that all complacent tours ascribe their ultimate success to unswerving trust in perfect preparation and strict displane . Take necessary medicine with you and an unbrella , assuring spending a safe and sound time . Respect public order and social morality in tourism activities , protect the ecological environment and respect the norms of civilised behaviours . Only if we behave well during a tour , can we creat an overwhelming majority of happiness . To sum up , if you want more information , please call me at 12345678.
