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Nowadays, my friend Daniel, the manager of a travel agency, invites me to make an arrangement about a tour to Shanghai for the customers of primary school students. Now , let me tell you this plan in detail. For one thing, there are, from August the 10th to August the 15th, totally 5 days during our tour, including the back-and-forth time. Besides, we will go to Shanghai from Kunming by train and take sightseeing buses to the following series of scenic spots. In the course of the tour , we will have comfortable rests in tourist hospital. Shanghai, of all the tourist places that have existed in China among numerous spots of sightseeing, may be the increasingly popular one. A sizable percentage of the places of historic interest, being well-known to the whole world , sits in Shanghai. Among those, there are, in my perception, classic spots extremely worthwhile to go, such as Orientak Pearl TV tower, Disney Land, Huangpu river. Next, let us come to the relevant itinerary, on the first day, we need spend a whole day on the way and the hotel, setting ourselves well in Shanghai. On the second day, 0riental Pearl Tower, as one of the representatives of culture of Shanghai, should be the first station to go. It is a mixed-use tower with telecommunications transmitters broadcasting over 80 miles, a restaurant, a hotel and observation desks. When seeing it from afar, it appears as though pearls are dropping from the sky onto a lush green plate that symbolizes jade. Thus, the two exceedingly valuable Chinese gemstones are represented in its structure. On the third day, we will have fun in Disney Land. Disney Land, as one of the most spectacular and innovative Disney theme parks in history, is waiting for us to discover the wonder of a never-before-seen world which will remind us of the magical dream within their hearts again. On the forth day, we can enjoy the beauty along Huangpu River, relaxing bodies and hearts. The last day, it is time to leave. Finally, the cost of entrance tickets accounts to 500 yuan, the cost of transportation and accommodation accounts to 600 yuan, so what you should pay just costs no more than 1100 yuan. It is a truth universally acknowledged that all complacent tours ascribe their ultimate success to unswerving trust in perfect preparation and strict discipline. Take necessary medicine with you and an umbrella, assuring spending a safe and sound time. Respect public order and social morality in tourism activities, protect the ecological environment and respect the norms of civilised behaviours. Only if we behave well during a tour, can we create an overwhelming majority of happiness. To sum up, for more information, please call me at 12345678.
