小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达不够丰富，要多积累高级词汇；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。

I have a friend. Her name is LiLi. She is a beautiful girl. She has black long hair. She has two big black eyes and a red mouth. She is a lovely girl. She likes rending book,playing computer game and chess. She is good at math. She thinks that learning math is interesting. She often helps me with Math. She is my best friend.