句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;文中词汇表达较为灵活,高级词汇需要加强,单词拼写要认真。
It is unwise to draw a conclusion after seeing or listening. I remember I have heard a story about Confusious.A day,Confusious saw his student was eating behind he and other students.He thought it's bad and was going to apoligize him.However,the truth is something dirty fell to the porrige and he ate the porrige contained dirty thing.Knowing te thuth,Confusious realized some situations seeing is not believing .This great people think it's smart to draw a conclusion right now. First, some time thuth
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