2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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A beautiful city in China I believe the place that my hometown named XingYi , where is a beautiful and nice place. It.will makes you happy. First of all, there has many interesting things, such as beautiful coast ,blue sky and special houses. Most importantly, the fresh air will makes you relaxing! Bedides, there has many delicious food and I can make the dinner for you.