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2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:04浏览次数:5168
要求:
题目 网络的近与远(题目自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay
要求
1.describe the picture and interpret its meaning
2.explain its intended meaning

3.give your point of view

大体意思:

网络的近与远 一/客观描述图:很多人在上网 二/说明意思:网络的普及是拉近了人们的距离还是使人们越来越疏远?


用户的作文(系统评分87.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒。

用户练习作文:

The caption indicated that people with growing numbers are absorbed in social networks. And below the drawing, there is a topic which says that persons are sitting one by one in a net, however, they do their own things on the Internet respectively without any communication. To sum up, they are closed with each other in real distances but far away in mental. Several factors could weigh heavily for depression of this phenomenon, yet, suspended at the top of the list are the following two causes. First and foremost, almost, almost all the teenagers are the only child in their family. And their parents are all busy with their works leaving their youngster alone. Hence, communication and company are absent in their growing. At the same time, with the rapid development of Internet, they naturally choose the network as the companies. Moreover, with the quickening pace of our life and ever-increasing pressure, numerous people are suffering either physical or mental problems. They release stress of life by surfing the internet. Hence, it is necessary for people, especially those absorbed in social networks, to participate in more activities in real life. When it comes to undergraduates, I think we can take part in technology and creative competition to push the eureka moment to realize the ultimate expression of magic inherent in the physics. Once we find our price, the interests of real life, even the friends through life, can we take the advantages of social networks rather than absorbed in it.

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