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2013考研英语二图表作文预测:出生率和婴儿死亡率

发布时间:2013-07-05 15:58浏览次数:3950
要求:

The table below gives information about the difference between life expectancy and infant morality. Write an essay of 160-200 words. Your essay should

1、describe the difference between life expectancy and infant morality

2、possible reasons

3、give your comment

You should write neatly on your ANSWER SHEET2.

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从句数量偏少;作者词汇基础扎实,注意文中极个别的拼写错误;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

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From the charter,the life expectancy gradually had risen from 40 years old in 1960s to 60 years old in 1990s;the infant mortality rate had fell from 20% in 1960s to 10% in 1990s. The above phenomenon may dated back to China history,The China republican country established in 1949 after many years' war,the war destroyed Chinese home and brought deep poverty and backward,In 1960s,people life and medical conditions were so poor that many people died in the middle age and many babies died for loss of nutrient and basical medical treatment. As China's reform and opening up,the economic development improve greatly people's life standard,in the circumstance,the life expectancy rapidly grew and infant mortality rate fell. A peaceful and stable environment is prerequiste for a country to enter properity,every country should protest against invasion and construct a peaceful environment for the world.

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