2005年12月24日英语四级作文真题:名校校园旅游

作者词汇基础不错，还请增加高级词汇的使用；句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

One can always find visitors taking pictures and enjoying the scenery on the university campus. During the May Day Holiday,National Day Holiday,summer and winter vacations,many University campuses become a popular tourist destinations.In my opinion,university campus should be open to tourists. In fact,there are many royal gardens and parks,all of them obviously better than the scenery in the Universities. Why do you think people prefer visiting here with their children? That is because it is a dream for many Chinese parents and young ideal students. Besides this,as more tourists come to visit universities,these universities can widen their influence as well and they can also make some profit from the tourism. In a word,I think the university campus should be open to the tourists.