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My new teacher is math teacher. She is beautiful. She has black long hair. She has two big black eyes and a red mouth. She often helps us. Our classmates like her very much. My math teacher is very kind. And she is very smart, isn't she? Today, we have math class. We are very happy.Because she teachs so funny. Who is she? She's miss zhou.