2015年高考作文优秀范文：我的家乡

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；从句数量偏少；用词灵活多样，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

In my middle school, maybe I am 12,a causal time I saw the LeBrom James in the Sport TV,you know,he is the super basketball player in the NBA and now he played for the Cleveland Cavaliers .I remember that day when he appear,I almost absolutely fascinated by him,he is very strong and basketball skill is much more proficient so that he has a nickname-'king'.From then on,I become his super-fan.And last summer,James led the team won a championship and he was the mvp.Although my body condition is pool in playing basketabll,for instance,my height is not enough, however, i will play in my mind. Besides James, i like Westbrook,and now he is played for the "Thunder".he is a famouse guard.Well,you know, this position need much more flexible and a widely prospective,in other words,in part he is the master n the game.