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2007年6月英语四级作文真题:致欢迎辞

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:08浏览次数:1793
要求:
欢迎辞,欢迎加入俱乐部。
标题:Welcome to our club
本文要求考生写一篇欢迎辞,属于一篇应用文写作,与04年6月的导游词类似,笔者认为难度不大,可按照以下提纲书写:   
1.表达你的欢迎;    
2.对你们的俱乐部作一个简要介绍。
用户的作文(系统评分80.0分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

Ladies and Gentlemen, First of all, please allow me to express the most heartfelt welcome to all of you on behalf of our English Club. We have been looking forward to seeing you for long. It is a wonderful day today. Now I would like to brief my club to you since I want to leave the most wonderful for you to discover. Our club, organizing various activities regularly catering for the needs of participants, is well-known among many English learners. If you want to meet native English speakers, please join us. If you want to speak English not only accurately but also fluently, please join us. If you want to discover the most attractive aspects in English, please join us. I do hope that you will enjoy your journey of English study with us. Thank you! Sincerely Yours Li Ming

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