文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分高级词汇;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;衔接词较为不错,但文章结构不严谨。
In recent times, I found more and more students get on-line. First, I think that we can get knowledge by using computers. Some computer games can make us smart. However, there still have many bad aspect. Playing games too much on computer make us spend less time on studying. Many students like chatting on-line to make friends with others. Even more, they spend time writing letters to each other. All these things will make bad effect on your study. So today I suggest that my students should get on-line on your summer and winter holiday rather than at school time.
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