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There are 50% students think that they have too much homework under big pressure.There are 30% students think that their parents are so strick to them without much communication.There are 20% students think that they do less sports and have bad health. Therefore, I have some suggestion below. The teachers should give students less homework, so that students can have enough time to do sports outside to improve their body healthy. Furthermore, they can have time to chat with their parents ,so parents can learn what they really want.