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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦165:说出你的烦恼

发布时间:2015-10-30 17:08浏览次数:1925
要求:
最近学校进行了“说出你的烦恼”的调查,请你用英语写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.50%学生认为作业多、压力大;
2.30%的学生认为父母要求严、相互沟通少;
3.20%的学生认为活动少、体质差;
4.说说解决的方法和措施。
要求:
1.句子通顺,表达准确,可适当增加细节使内容连贯;

2.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 词数100左右


Our school has made a survey -----“Don’t keep your worries ”.Here are the results.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.

用户的作文(系统评分64.0分
评语:

采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;请注意积累词汇量,尤其高级词汇的积累;复杂句使用不错,句法规范。

用户练习作文:

There are 50% students think that they have too much homework under big pressure.There are 30% students think that their parents are so strick with them without much communication.There are 20% students think that they do less sports and have bad health. Therefore, I have some suggestion below. The teachers should give students less homework, so that students can have enough time to do sports outside to improve their body healthy. Furthermore, they can have time to chat with their parents ,so parents can learn what they really want.

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