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【题目要求】
100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?
【点评一】
本题是2009年5月21日的话题，属于抽象类话题。抽象类话题看似难写，实际上只要转换成具体话题就容易手了。进步的领域：科技，教育。仍需改进的领域：环保，犯罪，人口老龄化，动物保护，文化语言保护。本题几乎无所不包，雅思写作题库中几乎所有话题都能用于本题。
【点评二】
题目 Some people think the human race has made continual progress in all areas of life, while others believe that there is less certainty about this. What areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we have not developed?
一些人认为人类在各方面已经取得了不断的进步，而另外一些人认为并非如此。人类在哪些领域取得了进步？哪些领域没有取得发展？
开头段 How to make a better life never fails to capture people’s attention throughout much of the human history ,which serves as a catalyst for the continuing development in every aspect of life. Some people, however, believe that the so called “development” cannot be regarded as real progress.
中间段1 回答第一问：人类在哪些领域取得了进步？ 1. 众所周知，几个世纪以来，人类一直致力于通过发展科技来改善生存环境。
It is commonly believed that human beings have been striking for improving living conditions by evolving science and technology for many centuries.
【论证示范】
Due to the convenient transportation system, citizens in China are able to enjoy fresh American lemons which were once not available to Chinese or people in many other counties. Communication modes mainly relied on writing letters in the past also witnessed a significantly transformation with the advent of internet, making friends or families enable to contact each other instantly by their computers or tablets.2.其次，与过去相比，人类在医学领域取得了许多突破。
Furthermore, compared with the past , there are many breakthroughs having been achieved in medical care.
中间段2 回答第二问：哪些领域没有取得发展？ 1. 污染，全球变暖，物种灭绝等环境问题已经成为很多国家头痛的问题，它们经常会陷于经济发展和生态平衡的困境中。
Environmental problems in terms of pollutions, global warming ,species extinction and so forth, have been a great headache to most nations who always trap into a dilemma between economic development and ecological balance. 2.各个种族和宗教间的武装冲突是一个持续性的问题，这对世界的和平与和谐造成了威胁。
Arm conflict among various races and religions is another endless problem posing a large threat to world peace and harmony.
结尾段 To sum up, although a lack of knowledge concerning how to control human desire seems to be a big handicap to human civilization, it should be admitted that we have made a great progress in many fields , and the advancement is expected to continue.
有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；作者词汇使用熟练灵活，但要注意避免拼写错误；复杂句使用不错，句法规范。
the time flies, the great changes has been hapending in our lifes with the development of economy and science. people around the world will connect each other conveniently and easily. firstly, for the education, as 100 years ago, only rich people had opportunities to get education from the school, however, the common people have right to get education and it is illegal if parents do not send their children to school. second, our lives become more and more convenirent with the techology improved fast. people can buy everything at home through the internet. we can easily meet our relationships which are far away from us by having a video call with them. besides, people do not need to worry the weather change because the air conditioning can make us feel cool in the hot summer and derive away the cold winter. there are so many fantastic discovery made our life better, such as smart mobile phone, wash machine and personal computer and so forth. however, there were also something haveing no changes. for example, the ineuqality between the female and male also widely existed among the small villeages and poor areas, even in some big cities. some employees also had serious biased ideas about the woman though the society strengthen the gender euality. what ' s more, great changes caused in some big cities, but some children in poor area also cannot go to school because they cannot afford the expense of the school. although the technology bring great changes of our lives, but we still cannot conqure the natural disasters. scientist had not find a good way to foresee and avoid every kinds of natural disasters. at last, some areas also got hard life because of the war. we are supposed to do our utmost to find an access to solve these problem above and build a better and peaceful life for us.
