2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

Dear sir I am writing to you express my thanks for your help in learning English. You are one of the best teacher who I have ever met. There many good points that I learn from you. During these day in your class, I have acquired much knowledge from you and it helps me a lot in my study. Firstly, you let me know what the west thinking pattern is straight thinking pattern. As a English learning, it is importance for me to understand the different between the west thinking.