2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；句法很棒，若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

Dear sir I am writing to you and thanks for your help in learning English. You are one of the best teachers who I have ever met. There many good points that I learn from you. During these days in your class, I have acquired much knowledge from you and it helps me a lot in my study. Firstly, you let me know what the west thinking pattern is straight thinking pattern. As an English learner, it is important for me to understand the difference between the west thinking.