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It's has been aroused our attention because of chinese study,especially for students.why does this happen? First,it's families' problem,many parents have a great expectation for their children so they let the students learn other things such as ,drawing,dancing,pinao ,and it takes students' much time to learn it. secondly ,nowadays teachers in the school get used to arranging so much homework that students have a great pressure on it.last,it's students' own problem,they like to use computers and cellphones to search information ,and they don't realize the importance of chinese.what does this result in? Obviously the lack of chinese spelling and writting for students, the more serious is that their chinese grades is poor.I think parents can let students have more leisure time to enjoy the knowledge and students can use electronial tools less,try to read book and write something sometimes.