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2010年6月英语六级作文真题:忽视中文学习

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:35浏览次数:2779
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题目 Due Attention Should Be Given To the Study of Chinese
要求
1.近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象;
2.出现这种现象的原因和后果;
3.我认为…
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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持,也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇。

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It's has been aroused our attention because of chinese study,especially for students.why does this happen? First,it's families' problem,many parents have a great expectation for their children so they let the students learn other things such as ,drawing,dancing,pinao ,and it takes students' much time to learn it. secondly ,nowadays teachers in the school get used to arranging so much homework that students have a great pressure on it.last,it's students' own problem,they like to use computers and cellphones to search information ,and they don't realize the importance of chinese.what does this result in? Obviously the lack of chinese spelling and writting for students, the more serious is that their chinese grades is poor.I think parents can let students have more leisure time to enjoy the knowledge and students can use electronial tools less,try to read book and write something sometimes.

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