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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11297
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;作者词汇表达灵活丰富,希望高级词汇的使用能更熟练;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

用户练习作文:

Recently, the mobile phone became a famous thing in our life. Following the technology developing that cell phone plays a more important role in human society. Neverthless it leads to some problem that we need to face. Every corn has two sides. Therefore the smart phone also gives us a good many advantages. First of all, it is convenient that we can communicate with each other anywhere. Secondly, we can use cell phone to search the internet when we need some information. Thirdly, it can also help us to find unkonwn places if we want to go. Unfortunately, it made a number of trouble things. On the one hand, Just as the picture said that people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see. It will cause traffic accident if we don't focus on the road. On the other hand, More and more people adore playing their own mobile phone when they go to bed. It is very bad to our eyesight. In my opinion , I deem that we should control ourselves do not use cell phone in the wrong way. Besides, we should do some meaningful things to take the place of smart phone. If we can use the right way to deal with cell phone problem, we will have a bright life.

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