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Some people think all children learn history in school is important. Some others think learning subjects more relevant to life is important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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As the development of the society, more and more people pay attention to the school curriculum design. Most of them showed their own ideas from their own understandings and prospects the education. On the one hande, some people consider all children have to learn history at shcool. From this views, history is very important for us. To memory the past histoty, we will be able to get some intelligent experiences and upset process from the accedents. What' s more, the exactly new ideas will be showed if you have the deep inspections about history. however, on the other hand, some of them think that is more imporant to learn something relevant to life. It may be owing to the society developed as fast as possible, so we do not get the old ways to deal with every problem we meet during the life. Children are supposed to learn more thing connected the life because their education serve to the real life finally. On a personal note, the two ideas showed above are both useful. But we cannot stand by one of idea of them and deny the other one. It is essential to design not only some cuurrculum about the history, but also to have some class involved in the life. The pratical technique can give us chance to adjust the society life more easy, but the konwledge we learned from histoy may decorate our characteristics and make us more elegant and intelligeable. Nowadays, we need to respect the past experiences that the past people created, and also would like to get some life skiils to get better life in the complexied and changeabel word.
