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字数：300 满分：100分
文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；用词灵活多样，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
Personally,I consider that we college students should spent our money sparely,so that we could live a steady and happy life. On the first place,it's difficult for our parents and us to earn money,therefore whenever we buy something we want we must think about it carefully.Besides,we spend money on the things that truely benefit us,for example,we should buy some books or donate our money to those who are needed.Secondly,there is no doubt that we students should try our best to save money rather than waste our money casually,sothat we could form a good view of managing our money.Last but not lest,as students,our major duty is to study hard ,but not for pursue the material enjoyment. In short,only we know hoe to use our money wisely,can we have a better life.
