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字数：300 满分：100分
文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句。
Personally,I consider that we college students should spend our money sparely,so that we could live a steady and happy life. In the first place,it's difficult for our parents and us to earn money,therefore whenever we buy something we want ,we must think about it carefully.Besides,we should spend money on the things that really benefit us,for example,we should buy some books or donate our money to those who are needed.Secondly,there is no doubt that we students should try our best to save money rather than waste our money casually,so that we could form a good view of managing our money.Last but not lest,as students,our main duty is to study hard ,rather not to pursue the enjoyment. In short,only we know how to use our money wisely,can we have a better life.
