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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第41篇:为什么学生会选择出国留学

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:00浏览次数:2792
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作文题目:

Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Why do some students study abroad?

Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.

很多学生会选择出国上大学。这是为什么呢?给出原因并作出解释。

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In China there is a saying that 'Read ten thousand books, traveling thousands of miles.' So more and more students choose to go outside and study abroad. The reasons are all as follows: First of all, study abroad can broaden our horizons. We can experience the foreign culture. Seeing more thing can improve ourselves. Secondly, foreign universities might be a better platform for us. We can learn the advanced technology. And add our knowledge. One day, when we come back to our hometown, we can help the government to contribute our city to a better place to live. Moreover, with the development of transportation industry, we describe our earth as the village. Because we can go to any corner of the world conveniently. And with the development of the economic, people have chance to go outside. We can make friend in foreign country and broaden the interpersonal relationship. Last but not least, we grow up with our parents. Going outside, we can just rely on ourselves. It can help us learn to be independent. In summary, going outside can take a lot of advantages. None will say 'no' to study abroad.

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