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字数:300 满分:100分
衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;文中词汇表达不够丰富,高级词汇方面要多累积;作者应增加从句的使用。
Nowadays,more and more people know it is important that we should save money. Most of us save money in different many ways,such as collect all kinds of coupons , buy clothes in a sale and so on .But some people are disagree with this .In my opinion, i think it is good for us that we save menoy.