文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练。
I have a good friend and her name is lucy,she is very beautiful and very kind-hearted girl. We always play with together. one day,an old grandmother wanted to go across the street,but her foot maybe are not convenient. Lucy saw her,she run towards the grandmother without hesitantly and accompanied the grandmother across the street. Lucy always helps other person,I often can learn something from her. I like her very much. She is always full of sunshine.