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文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；文中衔接词丰富；作者词汇表达较灵活，可是有些单词拼错了。
Cool city shuicheng, located in liupangshui, is a charming city and famous as the cool city,which iattract milions of people's attention. in order to experience it's natural scenery, my friends ask me to woork as her guide to travel the city. overlooking the city on the moutains ,you will find the city was srounded by many special moutains,that's why the local people called the city just like a baby under the protect of her monther. More importantly, clouds standing in the middle of the mountains that is the best gift for everyone to enjoy. joining the torch festival of the yi people , we dancing with people
