2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题；作者用词灵活多样，但要注意文中极个别拼写错误。

In my opinion that the people keep trusting between their circle and business,even the world 's many unequally affairs happened,the most of us are nice which is the first reason that people should be faith to each others. the second reason is that the good faith creates a great phenomenon of communciation which increases relationship，leads people to finish work confidently,improves efficient of work。 the third reason is about economy，coorpation want to contract with their partner,the trust of level realate to reach a contract, but there are some gaps in trust,the crime accidents under the no basic relationship，no ability to recognize who wre wrong and right,think it deeply before you have made a decision more benefit to trust than refuse to trust,in generally,trusting builds a energy world