题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;作者词汇基础不错,高级词汇使用比较灵活。
In my opinion that the people keep trusting between their circle and business,even the world 's many unequally affairs happened,the most of us are nice which is the first reason that people should be faith to everyone. the second reason is that the good faith creates a great phenomenon of communication which increases relationship,leads people to finish work confidently,improves efficiency of work。 the third reason is about economy,corpation want to contract with their partner,the trust of level relate to reach a contract, But there are some gaps in trust,the crime accidents under the no basic relationship,no ability to recognize who wre wrong and right,think it deeply before you have made a decision more benefit to trust than refuse to trust,in generally,trusting builds a warm world