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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第33篇:学校是否应该让学生评估老师

发布时间:2013-08-14 17:00浏览次数:1430
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. 

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

学校是否应该让学生评估老师。不同的人持有不同的观点。

字数要求:300字以内。

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句法知识掌握不错,但文中从句数量偏少;用词灵活多样,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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I totally agree with the statement that schools sould ask students to evaluate their teachers. We always can hear some sounds like" I really like this teacher or class , teacher can explain everything specificly." or " I'm going to quit, I can't understand what the teacher talking about int the class." In case, the evaluation become more important. Here are some reasons to support my issue: Firstly, everyone is equal in education. Teachers haave right to evaluate students. Student should also have the same right to choose their favorite teacher. Secondly, evaluation can reflect the quality of teachers' teaching level directly. When students point out the weakness of teacher, teacher can come over it. Without it, teacher can't find the problem themselves. Moreover, the reflection of evaluation can help teacher to make teaching plan and improve their teaching skills. Last but not least, it can help the school to know the teaching quality correctly.

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