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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12877
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分76.0分
评语:

作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇表达较丰富多样,高级词汇使用较熟练;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

用户练习作文:

Double major for college students is a good way to an increase in knowledge. So today I want to talk about the advantages of double degree, for these who don't like their own specialty students, double degree has more better choice, can help you learn, the more knowledge, expand their horizons, understand the different fields. Double degree learn more is to rely on self-study, self-study, this way can improve their self-control, exercise perseverance will power.Through own efforts to get a second degree certificate, can, have more competitive advantage in the employment. So I think the double degree is a good choice, for college students now, , if you can choose one of their favorite professional, to learn the double major, get a second degree certificate. This is definitely for you, and no pollution.

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