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2006年专四作文真题:存钱

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:27浏览次数:1977
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题目 My Idea of Saving Money
说明 Recently a Beijing information company did a survey of student life among more than 700 students in Beijing, Guangzhou, Xi'an Chengdu, Shanghai, Wuhan, Nanjing, and Shenyang. The results have shown that 67 percent of students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrow's money today is better, what do you think?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分72.0分
评语:

采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;拼写做的很棒,高级词汇可适量增加;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

Being frugal, is always a highly praised virtue in China. While spending tomorrow's money today to some extent demonstrate a lack of planning. As the saying goes: save against rainy day. You never know what happens in the next second. Therefore, putting aside a portion of the money can help us cope with any accident s more easily when we are in dire need of money. If we squandered the money on the things that we don't really need, or if we go even further as to spend tomorrow's money today,

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