采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;拼写做的很棒,高级词汇可适量增加;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒。
Being frugal, is always a highly praised virtue in China. While spending tomorrow's money today to some extent demonstrate a lack of planning. As the saying goes: save against rainy day. You never know what happens in the next second. Therefore, putting aside a portion of the money can help us cope with any accident s more easily when we are in dire need of money. If we squandered the money on the things that we don't really need, or if we go even further as to spend tomorrow's money today,