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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；作者用词灵活多样，但要注意文中极个别拼写错误；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Recently, internet on learning has became a hot topic. Following the technology development. Internet played a deeply important role. We can see internet everywhere.Such as food, traveling, education... Specially, Internet on learing turned into an allimportant part. Even though It gave us a good deal benefit, it cuased a series of bad things. We always can see this phenomenon that student use their mobile phone to search information. Some students deem that we check the internet to obtain informantion that is enough. Thus we need not go to shool for studying. As if the picture said that we learn how to use Google is enough. In my opinion, I think that we should not misunderstand education meaning. Even though internet on learning can gave us a plenty of advantage, it has a number of dis advantage.First of all, it is terrible things that will leads us to dependent internet. Secondly, there has a good many unnecessary information in the internet. Moreover, internet can not teach us how to becaome a good person. Therefore, I advice that we need take measure to tell young people how to distinguish internet on learning and education.
