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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9039[网页划词已开启]
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
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作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;从句数量偏少,且文中有几处句子错误;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

Recently, internet on learning has become a hot topic. Following the technology developed, Internet played a deeply important role. We can see internet everywhere.Such as food, traveling, education... Specially, Internet on learing turned into a important part. Even though It gave us a good deal benefit, it caused a series of bad things. We always can see this phenomenon that students use their mobile phone to search information. Some students deem that we check the internet to obtain information that is enough. Thus we need not go to school for studying. As if the picture said that we learn how to use Google is enough. In my opinion, I think that we should not misunderstand the meaningful of education. Even though internet on learning can gave us a plenty of advantage, it has a number of dis advantage. First of all, it is terrible things that will lead us to dependent internet. Secondly, there has a good many unnecessary information on the internet. Moreover, internet can not teach us how to become a good person. Therefore, I advise that we need take measures to tell young people how to distinguishes internet on learning and education.

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