2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Now,It's my pleasure to introduce the beautiful city to you-Qingdao. Qingdao,famous as the city of sailing boats.Located in the grogeous Jiaodong peninsula.In other word,it is a coastal city.There are plenty of tourist every summer,for the bule sky,fresh air and the crystal clear sea.May fourth square is its markland.Qingdao was once occupied by Germany,so you can watch a lot of west style buildings.like church If you are intertest in food,Qingdao has rich seafood.Of course,if you want go shopping,as a international city,you can buy anything you want,whatever.