2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

作者用词生动多样，请继续努力，希望能更灵活地使用高级词汇；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

I always believe nobody could get success without a strong will . A strong will could teach you how to spend the hard time . When you lose your direction of fight , think about it , you will found so many hard thing just need your inisit . And,your inisit is from your strong will. Since ancient time , only the person who with a strong can finish his great objective,because they never give up , until they got their honour. " Nothing succeeds without a strong will' also goes for the contemporary students . The no.1 always spend more time to study when the other schoolmates are playing . So,don't be jealous of them , think about yourself,how many time you do what you should to do ? remember , no hard , no success .