2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

作者用词生动多样，请继续努力，希望能更灵活地使用高级词汇；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

I always believe nobody could get success without a strong will. A strong will could teach you how to spend the hard time. When you lose your direction of fight, think about it, you will found so many hard thing just needed your inisit. And,your inisit is from your strong will. Since ancient time, only the person who with a strong can finish his great objective,because they never give up, until they got their honour. "Nothing succeeds without a strong will' also goes for the contemporary students. The no.1 always spend more time to study when the other schoolmates are playing. So,don't be jealous of them, think about yourself, how many time you do what you should to do? remember, no hard, no success.