2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

I always believe nobody could get success without a strong will. A strong will could teach you how to spend the hard time. When you lose your direction of fight, think about it, you will found so many hard things just needed your insist. Your insist is from your strong will. Since ancient time, only the person who with a strong can complete his great objective, because they never give up, until they got their honour. "Nothing succeeds without a strong will, " that also goes for the contemporary students. The no.1 always spend more time to learn when the other schoolmates are playing. So,don't be jealous of them, think about yourself, how much time you do what you should to do? Remember, no hard, no success.