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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40868
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。

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There is a famous saying among people that look before you leap, which aims to tell us that we should do everything with great thinking. Similarly, it is of great importance to realize that it is not a good choice with an impulsive decision. Amid our social society, there are all kinds of irrevocable complaints or regrets in people’s life. And most of these problems could have been avoided if they take a profound consideration and prevent them from making an impulsive choice. What’s more, people today are always facing diabetes, high blood pressure or heart disease etc, which are most induced by their unhealthy life style of which they pay less attention to it. Therefore, we should make a sensitive consideration before we make any choices. All in all, people today is always facing the overwhelming choices. With the high-speed life style and the various things in our life, it is difficult for us to decide what we really need. Possessing a sensitive heart, a considerable mind, it could be possible for everyone to avoid making a wrong choice.

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