2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少；复杂句采用很棒；文中用词稍显贫乏，文中存在一些拼写错误。

Ny hometown lie on FuJian NanPing,I would like to instrustion WuYiShan to my foreign friend.Wuyishan's senery is very bueatiful.Where has fresh air,you can palying bamboo raft.swiming in the river,the water is so clear that you can see the bottom,and in the river many fishes swiming freedom. enjioing yourself,breth the fresh air. The moutian is high,the road is smooth,i known you like climb mountain,cause you love in the high to see the world.