2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；从句比重偏低，有几处句子错误；作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇，在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练一些

It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. When we as a senior student,we have at lease six lesons to learn. If we just put all energe into one or two lesons ,there is no doubt that our score were very low ,and we couldn't passed final exams.So,it is unwise to put all eegs in one basket. If you were the rich ,would you put all your money in the same band ? In case the band would be steal ,your process were gone just once time !