2009年6月英语四级作文真题:博物馆免费对外开放

从句使用偏少；文章层次清晰分明，但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词；文章用词太过单一，高级词汇使用不足，单词拼写错误较多。

Nowadays,a lot of museums open to the public for free and a lot of people are attracted to go there . so it is brought some problems . At prensent ,The museums open to the public for free. in a bad one It is brought what the musem‘s will income will be reduce and a lot of people come to the musems will break the valuable things.This is very risky .In a good one ,a lot of musems open to the public for free,It will be rise fame of the museum and will have a lot of people to know this museums It is good thing For this thing ,I think open the museums for free and It can’t completely free .It can make a limte，At 0-18 old ages childen is completely free and another pepole can’t free .If we do this ,It will be bring some goods,The museums income will not a lot of reduce and huge traffic is limited .valuable thing will not be damaged ,It solve some difficulty of the museums,I think it is good me method